2012年8月9日雅思大作文真题范文:手机与因特网
Essay Topic(类似真题)>Mobile (cell) phones and the Internet play an important role in the way in
which people relate to one another socially. Is this a positive or negative
development? What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any
relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Example Writing(实验范文)>
Jeenn Lee Hsieh 谢振礼老师
Outline(心图): Social Mobility
起：connectivity(利) vs. anxiety( 弊)
承：connectivity(利)
转：anxiety(弊)
合：connectivity vs. anxiety(利 vs 弊)
>Now that you are benefitting from the use of the mobile phone and the
Internet as social media as well as social interaction, could you imagine what
your daily lives would be like without these inventions ? Living in this age of
information technology may be a blessing, but there seems an undesirable feeling
under disguise. For that matter, probably what you like would be social
connectivity and what you dislike might be personal anxiety.
>It is a positive development that people have found it so easy to
relate to one another electronically and share instantly in the social context.
As technology has advanced, so has the need to remain contact with friends,
family and loved ones. Through digital networking, the cell phone and the
Internet have opened doors to the current generation's lives, as previously
unheard of. While it goes without saying the many benefits that the Internet has
to offer, the latest hand phones are well-equipped with high-end features
catering to a variety of communication needs from voice calls to text messaging.
Apart from being able to help connect people anywhere and anytime, new handsets
of innovative technology boast cutting-edge functions designed to upgrade work
performance and provide fun factors, all at your fingertips. Besides, what do
you have to say about Facebook, Twitter and Google+ that are out there on your
computer screens or on your smartphones?
>Nevertheless, the heavy use in social networking of the mobile phone
and the Internet causes anxiety, not to mention the negative effects produced by
possible radiation. Chances are that these gadgets are getting you on nerves. It
is not so much because of such networking devices keeping you on alert 24/7 as
because of the thought of being without them sometimes. So, there are feelings
of increased anxiety during the absence of social mobility, as if when you were
psychologically alone in the middle of nowhere. And yet, once people being
connected, it appears to be no end of interactive communication, particularly
when driving, for instance. In this case, the epidemic of people using cell
phones to talk and to send text messages via the Internet behind the wheel could
give rise to more of a hazard than drunk driving.
>As long as social interaction is concerned, it may be said that the
hi-tech mobility is like a useful gift from heaven rather than a psychological
disease from hell. The benefits of social interaction through the cellular and
the Wi-fi seem indeed too good to be blamed. Whatever, there is no turning back
to the age of B.C. (Before Computer).
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