雅思写作辅导：2012年1月7日雅思G类大作文高分范文
IELTS Writing Task 2——同一天的雅思大作文，G类真题如下，或有与考题出入。A类试题是论引进外资的利弊，相关范文同步当天投稿。
——这一篇论现场节目与电视转播的比较，也是抽象立场的冲突，与任何其它论说文的真题没有两样。看起来很难下笔，真下笔了更觉得困难。谢振礼老师缺乏写关于这一题的细胞。取巧，把节目缩小为球类竞赛，再缩小为足球比赛。缩小的动作比较不会跑题。把题目的主题扩大才会冒险迷失走题。
——利用【隐形模板】加快写作速度。目标仅造18句话【起3承6转6合3】。
G类真题
Some people think that seeing live events is better than watching them on
television. Others think that it is better to watch the same events on
television at home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Example essay
Created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh
There is no worse place to watch a big game than at the stadium, especially
when you are not going with a number of friends. Experiences of seeing other
live events like baseball, basketball, hockey matches or even popular music
concerts could just be different, but definitely it is better to watch the same
football event on an HD screen. Ironic but true, some fans believe they have to
watch television because they miss too much by actually being there.
To begin with, it is more comfortable to watch a football game on TV
because you get a better view of the game rather than getting stuck at
nose-bleed seats. Money being not the issue with going to the game, there are a
lot of inconveniences such as dealing with the traffic, and the drunk, rude
people sitting next to you, the lines for toilets, and sometimes the hours it
takes to get out of the stadium, not to mention the bad weather plus violent
incidents. My particular concern, however, is the lack of replay. And believe it
or not, often the most interesting and dramatic part of the event can be seen
only on cable TV. And this is my personal reason for refraining from seeing live
events. Instead I would rather have families to watch the same events at home,
even though the games are fun to go if you are with the right friends.
On the contrary, some people would not hesitate saying that there is really
nothing like being at the football game in particular. Being at the stadium is
an experience money can buy, if you are not in a recession. That aside, it is
about communal atmosphere, the fresh air, and the feeling of 45,000 standing and
shouting. And how emotional it is being out there with peers to support your
team, cheering your guys and booing the other team and the referees. That can
explain partly why many fans agree that seeing live events are more enjoyable.
Besides, you may feel a sense of vanity because of the ticket stub you can stick
in a scrap book forever to prove you were there.
In conclusion, it is fair to say that either choice has something different
to miss. Whether watching sports events on television is better or worse
ultimately depends on what kind of person you are, what sport it is, where you
live, how much you are willing to spend, and more important, with who you are
going. The best thing to do, though, seems to be watching a sensational event on
television at someone else's home so you do not have to worry about cleaning
up.
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