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2010年雅思写作高分范文:欣赏阅读(5)

  Some people believe that students who want to go to university after
graduation from high school should have about one year’s time to get a job to
obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision.
          Do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
          High school students who intend to study at university should attend
tertiary education after graduation. To spend one year’s time doing a job to
acquire work experience or to travel for broadening one’s vision is, to my mind,
a waste of time and energy.
          First, university education is the continuation of high school education
for those students who want to pursue their learning at an advanced level. A
break of one year from academic study will probably weaken one’s memory of what
has been learned, especially for those who will study such theoretical subjects
as mathematics, physics or chemistry.
          Besides, many nations have established one examination that all students
must pass to qualify for admission to a university. For example, in China there
is a college entrance examination. Anyone who fails in the examination will be
denied of admission into a university.
          Furthermore, one year’s work or travel does not help students much in their
academic studies at university because it is unpredictable for one’s work
experience to be integrated into one’s studies of specific subjects, to say
nothing of traveling experience. Even if some subjects, such as MBA, require
students to have work experience, one year’s work experience, however, is not
sufficient to meet the requirements of three or five years, and one’s work
experience should, after all, be related to management.
          To conclude, I would rather suggest that university’s curriculum allow the
integration of academic study with practical training for the compensation for
students’ lack of work experience.(250 words)
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