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雅思写作技巧:怎样使句子多样化

  一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决定性作用。
          句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。
          总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:
          (1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)
          (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)
          (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )
          (4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)
          (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)
          (1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?
          最后,看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢?
          (6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.(7) He felt very unea……
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