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商务英语写作指导:范文汇总(07)

  A motivation survey
          Ex 3: Sample answer: (116words)
          Findings
          A number of employees clearly suffer from a lack of motivation as a result
of dissatisfaction in one or more areas of their work. The key findings are
outlined below:
          Staff feel undervalued by the company, both on a financial and a personal
level. It is generally felt that the companyˇs competitors offer higher levels
of remuneration. The perception that the managers are unappreciative of staff
efforts is particularly noticeable in the Sales Department.
          Certain employees feel under-challenged. The company is clearly not
exploiting its human resources.
          There appears to be a breakdown of communication in the Production
Department. The confusion and resultant ill-feeling towards managers has the
potential to disrupt the production cycles.
          Recommendations
          We strongly recommend the following measures:
          An evaluation of job profiles throughout the company to assess whether
skills could be utilised more efficiently
          A review of the current salary structure involving the comparison with
similar organisations
          It is also essential to investigate and take action regarding the
communication in the Production and Sales Department.
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