英语写作：四六级考前写作急训(8)
It was the morning of April 6th， 2003. At about 7：30， I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way， I noticed a boy riding in front of me， talking loudly with his friends. He didn't wear a raincoat； instead he held an umbrella in one hand， the rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road， he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.I think the boy's absent-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the unproperly parked truck， which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to the accident.
It was 8：00 this morning， I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate， I saw the terrible traffic accident happened.
A student ride his bike in a high speed， and just when he arrived the school gate， a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground， surely， the poor boy was hurt very bad.
I think there are two reasons for the accident. First， it was just the time we began our first class， the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late， he ride his bike so fast， even didn't low down his speed at the gate. Second， the truck is too large， and at that time， there were too many people walk through the gate， so the bike driver have no other way to chose， but to ride in the middle of the road.
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