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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】媒体类真题7.5分范文(2/2)

媒体类真题
        【Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertising instead of the consumers’ demand. To what extent do you agree?】
        媒体类真题来啦。~\(≧▽≦)/~
        先放送7.5分范文。
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        Pat老师修改了文章的错误。
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http://t1.g.hjfile.cn/listen/201305/201305190830521023006.mp3On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is people's choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers' buying habits. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not. In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.
In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buying goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in the sensitive area of businesses such as toy industries, it may be necessary to ban advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need.但从另一方面来讲,对于这种“广告中心论”的观点也存在着种种不同声音。况且,还是消费者最终对买什么有着最终的决定权。广告或许并不能影响到消费者的购物习惯。而每个人都有着自己的消费习惯。如果他们有足够的可供消费的金钱,那么怎么花这笔钱就是消费者自己的决定了。没有人能真正评判出商品的售出究竟是不是出于社会的需求。此外,每个消费者可供其支配的收入都是有限的,他们会根据自己需要购买的商品做出一定的预算,而不可能只是简单地受广告影响去买东西。
所以我们可以说消费者对自己要购买什么商品以及什么样的商品是好商品都有着足够坚定的个人观点,最好是让他们自己去选择适合自己的商品。所以,要说每个人都会被广告所左右,会在冲动下购买东西是非常不正确的。然而,对于像儿童玩具产业这样的敏感行业,政府的确应该禁止此类广告,因为儿童本身并没有足够的自制力来控制自己,而且他们也不清楚他们究竟想要什么。
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