新东方孙祥峰：2014年12月大学英语六级写作解析
第一篇:
刚刚过去的六级写作既符合一贯的规律，又有些不同于以往的做法。纵观最近几次六级考试，写作题常考的类型有引语评论类、漫画类和表格类，且往往是以引语评论类为主，穿插着几篇表格漫画题，而今年的三篇却全部都是漫画题。相比引语评论类的题型，漫画题还是相对比较简单的，关键在于能否正确地领会漫画所表达的含义。
对于漫画型的题目，我们的写作结构如下：
第一段：描述漫画，指出寓意
第二段：分析该现象的原因或影响
第三段：给出建议措施，展望未来
第一段
首先要正确理解漫画的寓意，结合题目的文字描述“whether technology is indispensable in education”以及漫画中的文字“I’m going to need tech support”，我们可以看出漫画表现的是现在的学生过多的依赖技术，连1+1这样最简单的题目也要寻求技术支持，独立解决问题的能力严重退化，这种现象需要引起我们的重视。
As is vividly described in the thought-provoking cartoon above, a student tries to work out a math problem which is quite simple, but to the teacher’s surprise, the students says that he needs tech support. What can be inferred from this cartoon is that some students rely on technology so much that they have lost the ability of thinking and solving problems on their own.
第二段
结合整个社会环境，随着描述经济和社会发展，技术的广泛运用给我们带来了很多便利，但是也带来了问题，就是人们越来越依赖技术。但是教育主要是培养学生分析和研究的能力，而技术直接给出结果，恰恰让学生失去了这个能力，甚至连1+1这样简单的题目也要求助技术。
Nowadays, with the development of economy and society, people are enjoying the comfort and convenience which are brought by modern technologies. However, they also bring about negative influence in some aspects, especially in education. As is known to all, the main aim of education is to cultivate the students’ ability of analyzing and researching, and then solve problems. But technologies, on the contrary, always provide them the final solution directly. As a result, students increasingly depend on technologies instead of solving problems by themselves. Just as is shown in the cartoon, they don’t even know the answer to a problem like what one plus one is.
第三段
总结文章，回答题目中要求讨论的问题，进一步指出教育的核心目标，以及学校和媒体应该怎样做来解决此类问题。
To sum up, it is no doubt that technology is not indispensable in education. We could use modern technologies to enhance the efficiency of education. But the core aim of education shouldn’t be ignored. Schools and mass media should convey the right message about how to make proper use of technology rather than rely on it.
第二篇:
第一段：描述漫画，指出寓意
It is vividly illustrated in the picture above that a student wants to borrow something on How to Do Well in School without Studying and the librarian tells him that this kind of book is in the fiction section which means that it actually does not exist. What can be inferred from the picture is that there is no shortcut to learning except hard work.
第二段：结合社会环境，分析做事是否有捷径，引申到学习上
As modern society is developing rapidly, the pace of our life continues to accelerate. As a result, everyone is trying to find out shortcuts to achieve their goals since nobody wants to be left behind. When it comes to learning, however, things are different. One has to accumulate knowledge and skills step by step, and after that, more practice is needed to consolidate what has been learned. Without hard word, doing well in school will remain a dream forever. Taking English learning as an example, many students want to have a good command of English. But without daily practice and memorizing lots of words and phrases, one can’t learn it well.
第三段：总结文章，给出好的建议措施
As far as I’m concerned, we college students should not expect any kind of shortcut when trying to do well in school. More attention should be paid to day-to-day practice and real hard work. Only in this way can we achieve our goals in study.
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