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2015年6月英语四级作文解析之母女对话(网友版)


       
               
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
               
               
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
               
               
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
                       
                                  
                       
               
       

          2015年6月13日的大学英语四六级考试正式拉开序幕,新东方网四六级频道第一时间为广大考生带来四六级考试真题答案以及解析,届时新东方多位知名教师也将第一时间对此次四六级考试相关真题做出详细讲解,敬请广大考生密切关注月英语四六级真题解析专题。
          Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.
You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and comment
on parents’ role in their children’s growth. You should write at least 120 but
no more than 180 words。
       


          破题思路:
          第一段:漫画描述,重点是母女之间的对话内容,从而引出文章的主题是有关孩子的独立性,家长干涉孩子过多。
          第二段:可以分析此现象产生的原因。
          第三段:采取措施解决此现象。
          How impressive the cartoon is in describing the most widespread social
phenomenon concerning the independence of the children. Let’s take a closer look
at the drawing, the girl told her mother she was accepted by the university of
her mother’s choice with pride. The author’s real purpose is not the drawing
itself, but to lead us to secure what hides behind the picture. What are the
reasons for it? In the following sentences, I’ll venture to explore the reasons.
To start with, the only-one child policy in China has made more and more parents
pay much attention to their children that they would like to replace their
children to do everything. In addition, parents don’t believe that their
children have enough ability to deal with their personal matters and make any
decisions. There are some suggestions given to our parents. For one thing, it is
quite important for our parents to realize that their children will grow up and
have their own ideas as time goes by. For another, children should be encouraged
to make some decisions alone so that they are able to pursue what they really
want. I contend that our parents should give their children a free hand in some
matters to help them to be independent。
          
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